Millions of boats glide on the streams of life,
Each whispering to the wind love songs,
And to the earth poems of transcendence,
While they explore this sea of dreams.
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beautifully delineated the imagery in every stanza on the crossing time of the sea in dream; pleasure to read this poem; from me 10+
Good poem. Your first is tha bomb. Really cute. Millions of boat people glide on the streams of life....so that the boats have life. Just my suggestion.