Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Crossing The Sea Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Millions of boats glide on the streams of life,
Each whispering to the wind love songs,
And to the earth poems of transcendence,
While they explore this sea of dreams.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 18 August 2020

Good poem. Your first is tha bomb. Really cute. Millions of boat people glide on the streams of life....so that the boats have life. Just my suggestion.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 August 2020

beautifully delineated the imagery in every stanza on the crossing time of the sea in dream; pleasure to read this poem; from me 10+

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