Crossing The Rhine, Gratefully Thine.... Comments
That sweet softening name
is still lingering in my mind
each time I am doing something else
it still evokes
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A lovely yet thought provoking poem. It expresses in beautiful and sweet details the desires and longings of the heart. Liked the last stanza. Asking and praying to the Lord for help and guidance conveys sincerity of our thoughts. Beautifully crafted write.10++++++
it is an ever-loving tune not only in June this over-tune in the dune my mind is never overtuned......so nice crunchy n crispy notes just remind me the RIVER Lohojong my school time! !
Thank you so much for your cute comments, Muhammad. Is Lohojong a name of a river? What a name! Your visit is most appreciated. G.B.U in Abundance.
The rough flow of the Rhine! ! The rough flow of this river. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Indeed, the Rhine is a broad and big river and oftentimes rough. Thank you for your kind comments, your visit is most appreciated. G.B.U. in Abundance. Amen.
Travelling abroad you have gained many experiences and your poem hunting is of excellent quality. Our Lord ever gives you bless and he nourishes your outstanding creativity. For your goodness we ever pray. Sweet softening name ever motivates mind. You are wonder. You are soft and fragrant like Jasmine. You have nicely bloomed in Lord's garden. You are Wonder-Jasmine....10
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8/2/2025 2:45:41 AM # 1.0.0
Excellent poetry dear poetess. Keep writing