Crossing The Line Of Discretion Poem by June FeirCruz

Crossing The Line Of Discretion

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We have known each other for so long
You always treated me with sweetness and compassion
And now I found myself crossing the line of discretion
And I am not so sure you welcome the intrusion

I feel so idiotic yet ecstatic
If I could undo the kiss, I would
I don't want to be just a distraction
Of your quiet and perfect world

I found myself wanting to taste the wine
I just want to feel oh so sublime
Yet I know I have to tread oh so carefully
Because, I don't want to lose what I never have

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Les Derbyshire 01 April 2009

Oh, who has not been here? An unguarded moment and...

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 September 2008

Behold! Another revelatory gift to the public. Less creative, but no less interesting. GW62

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Reshma Ramesh 24 September 2008

wow! ! beautiful...........

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