Crossing The Line! ! ! Comments

I believe we have all been here one point in life.. Its hard when one dosen't see the other only as a great friend. I hope you gave her this poem sometimes we are blinded with love by a great friend.. Great piece I believe this is one of you're best of work.. Krista

Good write Compton. Forever love is already here, there, everywhere. You just have discovered it from a certain point on the line. Best Wishes. Naseer

this is really good but try putting it into poem stanza

quite long but a very beautiful write indeed, thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

this is a fantastic poem, you can really picture this and imagine how much effort has gone into it, i applaud your oustanding work and hope she realises how lucky she is

This fully describes your love in the astounding!

i love the emotion of this poem its very strong and it's delightful 10+++++