Saturday, July 7, 2012

Crossing The Jumna-Valmiki's Hermitage Comments

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Morning dawned, and faithful Sita with the brothers held her way,
Where the dark and eddying, waters of the sacred Jumna stray,

Pondering by the rapid river long the thoughtful brothers stood,
Then with stalwart arms and axes felled the sturdy jungle wood,
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* Sunprincess * 14 November 2015

.............very nice couplets....and rhyme very nicely ★

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