Sunday, May 25, 2008

‘crossing The Bar' Once Again... Comments

Rating: 4.3

Beyond the gaze there is a time zone
of rumored agitation
when you cannot sleep.
You open your eyes quietly to complain.
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Satish Verma
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Rahul Shil 17 October 2017

This poem is spiritual..... and this poem is touched my heart...I feeling well reading this poem.

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Sofia Kioroglou 29 October 2015

Brilliant write! Good ink!

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C. P. Sharma 14 December 2009

Thought provoking. Kabir says, During the first 'crossing of the bar' I wept and the whole world rejoiced, On 'cross the bar' again, I will rejoice Others will weep in anguished noise. CP

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Rayhan Rhyne 16 August 2008

It is time to leave the waiting room, but i have come and will come again with all my sorrows, fears and happiness, someone will hold my hand, perhaps the same one.

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Subbaraman N V 16 June 2008

If you are blessed with those eyes (pl. see my poem under this caption) you will enjoy this crossing the bar once again!

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