up and over now
she's gone-
leaving you
guilty-
...
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This is so beautifuly written, and so compelling. I want to thank you for writing this, truth is, here again, I so identified with it! Theodora Onken
this piece is frustrating. while I agree, you're very talented..I think you've only hinted at the emotion in this piece..had you gone all out, it would of been mind blowing.... either well, I enjoy reading your work, as always. Amberlee