Wednesday, February 2, 2005

Crossing Over Comments

Rating: 5.0

up and over now
she's gone-
leaving you
guilty-
...
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Adryan Barnathan
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Amberlee Carter 28 March 2005

this piece is frustrating. while I agree, you're very talented..I think you've only hinted at the emotion in this piece..had you gone all out, it would of been mind blowing.... either well, I enjoy reading your work, as always. Amberlee

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Rebecca Randle 03 February 2005

I love this. You are very talented. :)

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Lenchen Elf 03 February 2005

A thoughtful piece Adrienne, lovely: -)

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Theodora Onken 02 February 2005

This is so beautifuly written, and so compelling. I want to thank you for writing this, truth is, here again, I so identified with it! Theodora Onken

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