Crossing Over Comments

Nice concept. You are invited to comment on my poems.

nice one...Crossing over and over again Leaves the memory to tell in you... This is the journey of life...

Full of humanitarian approach in the poem and told bravely that only the brave survives.....nice one.

Full of humanitarian approach in the poem and told bravely that only the brave survives.....nice one.

Full of humanitarian approach in the poem and told bravely that only the brave survives.....nice one.

Good, meaningful attempt......liked it.

your words are meaningful and touch but like I said you must make it ryme.

Hello friend and this is a very good poem. Thanks for sharing, LC TAylor

well written ogunleye...i really like it..keep up the good work...

This is a excellent poem Ogunleye keep up the good work. I truley mean it. You are an awesome poem writer.

This is really good Ogunleye and I really like it. Let your past be your memories and move on.

beautiful poem, i like the figuratives.

Awesome...spoken like a true poet...way cool too!

Quite insightful. A nice piece of art.

Quite insightful. A nice piece of art.

There's poetic afflatus in this immersion in the human condition, whose center is the passage. Remembering Anabasis, Odyssey but with, more, a deep femininity. But more than everything, in the background, the naturalness of Darwin.

a beautiful message, beautiful flow of words..I love it

'Make you a conquerer' Conquerer is the only thing spelled wrong in this poem. Conquerer in spelled conqueror, but over all the poem is grate! 'write on'

wow i like it: O realy good

quite cool keep it up