Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Crossing Ocean Avenue Comments

Rating: 5.0

After the gray car passes,
They step off the median,
Fingers joined like
Magnets that have clicked.
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Gary Witt
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 December 2008

Exceptionally detailed, pictorial crafting, Gary...You place your this pen-gem in the core of the Reader's mind's-eye, with much resplendence.Solid Work, indeed! FjR

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Amber Lamb 20 June 2008

Gracefully captures the subtle moments of being in love. Very well written, felt like I was watching this couple.

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