Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Crosses Comments

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Baffled and bewildered
Unwielding weights
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JoAnn McGrath
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Melvina Germain 03 June 2007

There are times when the burdens are just too much to take, it is then that we must have faith and leave it in the hands of the Lord. I love your acrostic poem JoJo, one can clearly see what the poem is about when taking a letter from each line and spelling it out, in this case 'Burdens' is your content. Excellent work, great poem. A big (10) from me.-Melvina-

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... Sheila 30 May 2007

Come unto me, all ye that are weary and heavy laden, and I will give you rest! He surely will take it all from you, won't He? Excellent and '10'

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