Will you walk with me?
We shall move out fast
'Cause you're the only one,
One left, one last
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Nice use of repetition.. It gives a color in this poem. Nice write.
Nice poem! ! I'm happy that I got in touch with one more a brilliant poet.
Thanks for the lovely comment Nilakshi, thanks for reading also :)
Wow! Sawan, a fabulous write on love.The refrain one left, one last has added sweetness to your poem.