Thursday, July 19, 2012

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Rating: 4.0

Will you walk with me?
We shall move out fast
'Cause you're the only one,
One left, one last
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Sawan Dhyani
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COMMENTS
Neela Nath Das 16 February 2014

Wow! Sawan, a fabulous write on love.The refrain one left, one last has added sweetness to your poem.

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Sawan Dhyani 11 February 2014

Thanks Mac. Thanks a lot. :)

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Mac Adrone Adonay 10 February 2014

Nice use of repetition.. It gives a color in this poem. Nice write.

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Sawan Dhyani 19 August 2012

Thanks Bharat & Shivani.

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Shivani Gupta 18 August 2012

A simple and sweet poem..like it

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Bharat Mehru 14 August 2012

Nice poem! ! I'm happy that I got in touch with one more a brilliant poet.

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Sawan Dhyani 06 August 2012

Thanks for the lovely comment Nilakshi, thanks for reading also :)

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Neela Nath Das 21 July 2012

So lovely poem. Love, innocence entwined.

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