Friday, December 15, 2017

Cross The Wide Blue Ocean Comments

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J-ust cross the wide blue ocean,
A-llow not your dreams to fail;
N-ever fear the brewing storm,
E-ven the waves during your sail.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2017

Storm will never become obstacle for life. Gods's grace is falling on us. You cross the wide blue ocean easily. An interesting and brilliantly penned poem is well drafted.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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