Cross Roads Comments

Fantastic! In the desert sun I lay kissing the ground oceans became and quenched my thirst.

we are all standing on cross roads...clueless and arid! ! well-written

I love this Rehan, how one poem can inspire another. Serious thoughts pondered on here, much introspection.... Godo poem. HG: -) xx

a protray of my own sorrow.. the conflict of my soul and dilemma of my dreams.. thank you.. rehan for capturing such beauty.. in timeless verses

Very well written.... excellent write!

Nicely done, Rehan...Cascading structure employs smooth, crisp & tight structural fluxion.Solid crafting. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..