We had met
On the threshold of a dream
Or in the sprawling hall
Of torturous silence
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this is relatively a very good and a very expressive piece..touched with different emotions and ends in a question...really a a good poem from a very intelligent author..i include this n my favs...naizz
i really like this poem it is very nice your a good poet
a touching write full of pathos filled romance...the second stanza lines read great...thanks Naseer...10
ended by a touching question..it start and flow with a wonderfully deep thoughts..a poem for the minds to ponder about
Naseer, what a true t you really are, you works are so touching, your pen always flows golden my friend...loved this piece 10++
Very amazing and very touching it's wonderful! one of the best i have seen so far i gave it a 10 :)
very deep, and touching. also very insightful and flowing. i gave it a 10! =]
yes my friend, another in depth thinking, brilliant lines only great wisdom could write such poetry....
Beautiful, Very Touching as Hema had put it. Intence as well.1-10 i give 200
we had met you begin......to end with a question....touching.....poetry....
The last line asks a provocative question that may not find its answer even in eternity. A very profound, eloquent write. I congratulate both you and your translator. Always your friend, Sandra
Life is full of questions, but very few answers, you write with zeal and that makes your poems both deep and thought-provoking, liked them a lot.