Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Cross On One's Own Shoulder Comments

Rating: 5.0

We had met
On the threshold of a dream
Or in the sprawling hall
Of torturous silence
...
Read full text

Naseer Ahmed Nasir
COMMENTS
Ejaz Khan 18 June 2009

Life is full of questions, but very few answers, you write with zeal and that makes your poems both deep and thought-provoking, liked them a lot.

0 0 Reply
Naidz Ladia 03 May 2009

this is relatively a very good and a very expressive piece..touched with different emotions and ends in a question...really a a good poem from a very intelligent author..i include this n my favs...naizz

0 0 Reply

i really like this poem it is very nice your a good poet

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

a touching write full of pathos filled romance...the second stanza lines read great...thanks Naseer...10

0 0 Reply

ended by a touching question..it start and flow with a wonderfully deep thoughts..a poem for the minds to ponder about

0 0 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2009

Naseer, what a true t you really are, you works are so touching, your pen always flows golden my friend...loved this piece 10++

0 0 Reply
Shylah Clarissa Turcotte 28 April 2009

Very amazing and very touching it's wonderful! one of the best i have seen so far i gave it a 10 :)

0 0 Reply
Yll L 26 April 2009

im quite amazed by this poem....

0 0 Reply
Hailey Agnew 26 April 2009

very deep, and touching. also very insightful and flowing. i gave it a 10! =]

0 0 Reply
Noel Horlanda 25 April 2009

yes my friend, another in depth thinking, brilliant lines only great wisdom could write such poetry....

0 0 Reply
Angel (Leea) shikaku 23 April 2009

Beautiful, Very Touching as Hema had put it. Intence as well.1-10 i give 200

0 0 Reply
Malini Kadir 23 April 2009

we had met you begin......to end with a question....touching.....poetry....

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 22 April 2009

The last line asks a provocative question that may not find its answer even in eternity. A very profound, eloquent write. I congratulate both you and your translator. Always your friend, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success