Friday, August 17, 2012

Crocodile Grin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Manitou slides
Doppelgänger silhouette
Ballet prides
Twisted contorted pirouette
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karen sinclair
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Smoky Hoss 13 January 2015

This is an amazing dream! ... or 'twas it a nightmare?

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Owain Glyn 16 March 2013

A teasing piece of horror that is amusing, an extraordinary piece of writing.

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Knight Fizzstorm 24 August 2012

Immaculately perceived and stunningly delivered. A captivating poem. I commend you.

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Ruth Walters 20 August 2012

spooky! Brilliantly written though

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Kelly Seale 20 August 2012

Very clever! Very Good Write Karen! I enjoyed your style! -Kelly.

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Danny Draper 18 August 2012

Creepy in a slow skin crawling verse that Stephen King would love to have written.

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Godfrey Morris 18 August 2012

This is a clever write

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Hamid Negah 18 August 2012

Skillfully written, very Interesting...i loved it.

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Interesting write, captivating.

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