Critiques are not to stroke one's ego like a phallus.
Nor are they to be said in anger or in malice.
If one's structure points to a technique.
Then that's what must be pointed out in critiques.
Whether Waka, Tie or Haiku.
Only the rules in these will do.
Not everyone will like what you write.
So don't consider critiques a slight.
If you don't understand what I say
To this next part, attention do pay.
Perfect in structure shape and form.
For Tie poetry this is the norm.
Tie Poetry
Tie poetry has three very strict rules.
1. Every word must be one on or syllable.
2. Only two lines in the poem.
3. Only three words in a line.
With that in mind this is a poem.
Up your but.
You numb nut.
By
Josehf Lloyd Murchison
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem