Friday, April 10, 2009

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Rating: 4.0

Everyone is watching me
and they can see what I don't want seen.
Mirrored eyes run through my soul
and tell a tale I don't want told.
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Christine K. Trease
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And being aware of that you're not yourself, because you feel uncomfortable and keep things you really want to do to yourself, presenting to the watching eyes these little imperfections as a sign of your revolt. And on the other hand those who are watching aren't perfect either, so nobody wins or loses this vicious show...

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Christine K. Trease

Christine K. Trease

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