Friday, October 23, 2009

Critical Comments

Rating: 3.8

every word you speak, every stare
you give
makes me seem so weak, along with every glare
never a look that says you forgive
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

sarcasism is the best way to keep your voicew from cracking

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Obinna Eruchie 12 November 2009

You let him know his words can not hurt him and that he has to watch his words and himself before criticising you.

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moribund love 23 October 2009

nicely penned. words are flowing.10+

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Eyan Desir 23 October 2009

Good write..but you believe me weak? Why did u say that in the poem it's I am weak...? anyway it was a fun read

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