Friday, January 26, 2007

Crisscross Comments

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Our soft shadows crisscross,
I clasp wisp hands, they clasp mine

Shade silk strands link locks,
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Landrey 28 January 2007

wow so much packed in here, very good, and yet still room for the reader to involve him/herself. that third line was a doosey! ! talk about alliteration! ! I'm calling it post-impressionistic, meaning expressionistic. -landrey

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R. S. Farris 27 January 2007

One of my favorites... I'm calling it impressionistic.

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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