Crippled Soul Comments

Hello Awesome Poets, I no longer have access to this account, so I created another one to let you know.I also want to migrate my early poems to Instagram. Please find and follow me at #my.gypsyheart.poetry. I still write many of my life and love confessions in my recent work. Thank you. cheers Reinalie Jorolan

This poem is full of pain, very sad indeed. A wonderfully well written poem, excellent.---Melvina---

its painfully wonderful... Take care Roger

so hard to watch helpless as one self destructs....been there....great poem....Vallerie

Something grabs me in this poem. I would suggest, if only as an experiment, to shift to the first person and speak to us from her inner experience rather than looking at her. Take care, John Kay