Crimson Velvet Of Passion Comments

As you reach to step in time With the love that sings to me Of future days and hopes This is the punch line of the whole piece Fi. So romantic and dreamy, as well as surreal again. A lover far away across the miles but you are still connected. This actually made me smile, even though I am in miserable pain. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing sis. Love & hugs, Barbara

Nice verbal dance around desire.

A Fabulous passionate poem....that enfolds the reader in warmth of love...and comfort....well written with great imagery Sue x

Wonderful Fi..so comforting in its truth.... Hope you're well. Best wishes Premila 10+++