Thursday, January 12, 2012

Crimson Tears Comments

Rating: 3.1

I shed a tear when you walked away
A tear of blood dropped that day
As in my heart the tears were shed
And in my soul, I felt so dead.
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(De Va)
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Pheko Motaung 27 January 2012

A majestic poem.I am touched.The Good Lord bless you.And this tinged with touches of sadness...and brilliance poem.Congratulations.

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Unwritten Soul 23 January 2012

Crimson red, your tears..falling down but Crimson red is your rose petals beautiful as your own thing but Crimson red is alive like a blood to survive your life even days swing Crimson red, your tears..falling down still color of the ocean stay blue...cool you will blue mood

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Eric Cockrell 12 January 2012

sad, intense poem... good write!

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Silentpoet Grl 12 January 2012

Gorgeous poem!

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Dave Walker 12 January 2012

A very sad but beautiful poem with a beautiful flow. A great poem.

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