Crimson Tears Comments

Hey this is a marvelous piece

Not by guns Not by malevalence Use love and kindness Know God’s oneness YOU CAN ERASE BOUNDARIES And earn boundless happiness --- Fabulous stanza.......a poem written with zeal, a way to peace, of brotherhood to all of us.....10++++++++++++

Nice and perceptive poem, Sathya. Reflects the necessity of mutual understanding and respect in today's malice torn world.

Concise, terse, and filled with haunting imagery. You grab the reader's attention for sure. Well done. Just one point: should it not be noise verses noice? -John

Sathya, this an excellent plea for peace and a recognition we are one. 10/10 Bob

ahh! ! Too hard hitting! loved it! I havent been around for long now.. I know :) pleasure to read you though

Excellent anti-war poem Sathya, great message. Best wishes, Andrew

What an honest appeal in this emotive verse Sathya - - and would do well to be echoed worldwide...... top marks for this..... from Fay.

I like this one....it's pretty popular too!

that was very true- after the voilence the repentment because they come to their senses- agood capture of the situation=10

This is beautiful, Sathya. Something so complicated can be so simple when put into the proper perspective, as you have done here. It emphasizes the senselessness of war and the destruction of precious souls before they've had a chance to live and experience the joys of life. Without bias - we are all of the One, and each spirit deserves equal respect and love. A powerful piece. Linda

Matured Stroke by pen! !

Knowing God's Oneness, we can never understand the carnage of those who take life as if it were nothing. The questions will never have an answer, there is no reason good enough for the sins against God and Humanity......10

A very powerful write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

bhayya its a great write indeed...true so true, i believe each and every word of this poem and after reading this story a silent tear dropped inside...thanks for sharing 10+++++++ and A++++ rgds asif

wow this one really spoke to me i love it thank you keep writting

you have penned down a great thought.10++++ for this masterpiece. regrds, vaibhav pandey

sir, hold the torch! i am with you rgds

A touching poem, very well done!

The brutality of the first stanza's and plea for sanity in the last. A worthy poem with a worthy message. Bob