Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Crimson Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

I would never want to see you cry
Your tears are so beautiful
But nothing compared to that smile
You’d present in front of everyone else.
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Aiden Florence
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Lilly Mandrell 19 June 2008

I like it. I think it could take a little tweeking in a few virces, but I really like it, and thats jusy my opinion. Lilly

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Casey Gauthier 12 June 2008

I enjoy it. and I don't think you're losing your touch. :)

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Serenity Prayer 11 June 2008

aww. its sad, but cute. i understand what you mean. its hard to explain, but you explained it very well. excellent job. i absolutly love it.

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