Monday, July 15, 2013

Crimson River Comments

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Flowing steadily, spiralling
cotton stained rorschach rings,
absorbing permanent pain.
Dripping slowly, amidst white wrists -
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Pamela Wise
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Indranil Bhaduri 16 July 2013

Beautiful write..keep going

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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2013

absorbing permanent pain. Dripping slowly, amidst white wrists - Crimson river. Some notes to the poem might help one grasp it.

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Gajanan Mishra 15 July 2013

absorbing permanent pain, good write, go on, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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