Tuesday, January 1, 2013
*** Crimson Red Comments
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I stood and watched, head bowed, as raindrops fell,
upon the Poppy Wreaths of crimson red.
They trickled down the petals like slow tears,
washing away the blood that had been shed.
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David Mitchell
09 July 2013
I like this. The beginning of the first stanza is excellent. In some lines the scansion doesn't seem quite right, though.
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10/24/2025 10:27:52 AM # 1.0.0
Nice one Ernestine.Not been on this site in a long time. Excellent work as ever