Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Crimson, Razor's, Depression, And Suicide Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crimson:
The color of the liquid that now flows from her wrist. She
turned to her trusty 'friend' that's never failed her.
Razor:
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It sounds so familiar, like the reasons of my poems.. I like it... Sad though it may be.

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 15 May 2008

...I kinda like it! Really sad though... ~A Little Blue Bird~

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Michael Pruchnicki 15 May 2008

What a stimulating poem NOT! I don't know about Christ's redemption saving one from suicide, nor does anyone else, I venture to say, but simply emptying raw emotion in lines does not constitute a poem! A piece, perhaps, of self pity and an effort to warn others, I don't know!

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Lacey Unknown 14 May 2008

I really enjoyed this piece. It's so sad but anyone who has been through a cutting experience knows this feeling. To anyone out there who may be dealing with this I would just like to say that this is not the best or only way to deal. The redemption of Christ can save you from anything, just as He has done for me! ~Lacey~

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