Tuesday, February 2, 2016

Crimson Orbs Comments

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Shaken from the deepest slumber
Eyes like saucers staring wild
Midnight storms of rain and thunder
Had never scared me as a child
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Edmund Strolis
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Nosheen Irfan 16 February 2016

Wow. The reader is definitely in the grip of suspense n thrill. A very gripping read. Im on the edge of my seat. It had the effect the poet intended.

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Edmund Strolis 16 February 2016

Thank you so much Nosheen although in horror it is a slight fantasy compared to your poem wherein the two lovers meet and are murdered. I assume that this was based on a true story.

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