Crimson liquid
Flowing down
Crimson liquid
All around
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This poem is so beautifully written. You have such an amazing talent. However... it scares me. I know you may say that it isn't about you, after all you are still alive... but if you're writing about it, you must have had thoughts of sucide at one time. I just want to say keep writing and see if you can channel better thoughts. God bless! ~Lacey~
not bad! awesome! u know, it takes talent to write stuff so gothic.