Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Crimson Cymbals Comments

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The clash of colors that surrounds
stuns the sense, breaks the bounds.
My mind instructs my eyes' belief
challenged now by every leaf.
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Mary Havran
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Manonton Dalan 28 January 2016

very nice rhymes/////////

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Dwayne Bailey 23 December 2007

Beautiful write. I am able to visuialize all the colors as the poem changes. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Dwayne

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Peter Cyril Riloskovic 01 November 2007

You have love of colour it is show in the words.

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