Friday, November 25, 2011

Crimson Blood Comments

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Slits upon wrists cry before dawn,
They weep louder, the most melancholy song,
Light weakens every inch of shadowy brawn,
Sleeping I lie upon fate,
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Crimson Love
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Ken E Hall 27 November 2011

Your beau sounds like Dracula who only drinks enough of your crimson sweetness to let you live to forgive your sins...luvli...regards

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Harindhar Reddy 26 November 2011

Crimson Love Your poem is special though it is melancholy. A good poem of yours. Every line is special yet I have my own favorite lines int he poem.... 'Games are played, yet no one ever wins, An enigma of you dancing on deaths whim.' If I gotta grade your poem it is one + a circle (10) Ha! ha! :) :) :)

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Shadow Girl 25 November 2011

Truly beautiful, striking poem..loved it -SG

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