Slits upon wrists cry before dawn,
They weep louder, the most melancholy song,
Light weakens every inch of shadowy brawn,
Sleeping I lie upon fate,
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Crimson Love Your poem is special though it is melancholy. A good poem of yours. Every line is special yet I have my own favorite lines int he poem.... 'Games are played, yet no one ever wins, An enigma of you dancing on deaths whim.' If I gotta grade your poem it is one + a circle (10) Ha! ha! :) :) :)
Your beau sounds like Dracula who only drinks enough of your crimson sweetness to let you live to forgive your sins...luvli...regards