The color of crimson
covers my wrist
as I sit and try to stop it
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Pain doesn't leave when you hate it Hurt you can control is an illusion Because it always owns you in the end Love is patient, love is kind... He always protects, always hopes, Always perserveres. Love never fails. Prayers for your mom to see What's really going on in you
i love this poem so much emotion well done keep up the good work
will writen poem you have real skill put this in a contest because you would win
WoW this is a nice poem, but i just hope u stop cutting yourself thats really not a way to solve your problems even tho I.....but it's a good poem
i love this poem it is very good. keep writing and plzzz stop cutting ur wrist i no it might help get out ur anger but it doesnt make the world a better place
Great flow of emotion..vivid imagery....sadness..yet calm..nice write. -SG x
i get the poem my mom does not understand some times but its not some thing to cut your self over i hope you did not the idea that i am someone who would do that my mom drives me crazy so i dont cut my self i do the best thank for it. smoke a j thats the best way to deal with something: P
Ok... I dont get the comments below. why do we cling to darkness? Young lady, please nev er cut yourself. you're special. dont do it.
i can really feel ur feelings by th is peom
wow this is a amazing piece of poetry by far the best keep up the work
Wo0o0o0w, gr8 work, that's really what I call the magic of poetry, so beautiful and awesome and remember me of a famous poet here her Nickname is Crimson Love, she is also talented like you, a gr8 piece of work, keep it up, we wait more from you :)
beautifully written. perfectly said.