Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Crimson Comments

Rating: 4.6

The color of crimson
covers my wrist
as I sit and try to stop it
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Arielle Friese
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Star Crossed Lady 31 January 2013

beautifully written. perfectly said.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 08 February 2012

Wow such powerful emotions i like :)

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Bonnie Lundgren 05 February 2012

Pain doesn't leave when you hate it Hurt you can control is an illusion Because it always owns you in the end Love is patient, love is kind... He always protects, always hopes, Always perserveres. Love never fails. Prayers for your mom to see What's really going on in you

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Misses Unknown 30 January 2012

i love this poem so much emotion well done keep up the good work

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Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

will writen poem you have real skill put this in a contest because you would win

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Dj Hart 20 January 2012

A deeply thought poem. Well written. Excellent.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 12 January 2012

Wow, it sure does elicit a powerful response.

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Devon McElveen 20 December 2011

This poem had me thinking, very powerful

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Chance 20 December 2011

Like....typos though

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Hope Anderson 16 December 2011

WoW this is a nice poem, but i just hope u stop cutting yourself thats really not a way to solve your problems even tho I.....but it's a good poem

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Vipins Puthooran 16 December 2011

[A true-feel of writing] A g'd poem! ! !

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Dianna Renate Evans 16 December 2011

i love this poem it is very good. keep writing and plzzz stop cutting ur wrist i no it might help get out ur anger but it doesnt make the world a better place

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Crimson Love 25 November 2011

Very beautiful and vivid poem. Truly lovely :)

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Great flow of emotion..vivid imagery....sadness..yet calm..nice write. -SG x

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Didier Saidi 21 November 2011

i really like this, a lil twist to it

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jacob pettey 15 November 2011

i get the poem my mom does not understand some times but its not some thing to cut your self over i hope you did not the idea that i am someone who would do that my mom drives me crazy so i dont cut my self i do the best thank for it. smoke a j thats the best way to deal with something: P

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Ok... I dont get the comments below. why do we cling to darkness? Young lady, please nev er cut yourself. you're special. dont do it.

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i can really feel ur feelings by th is peom

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Devils Favorite Child Blade 10 November 2011

wow this is a amazing piece of poetry by far the best keep up the work

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Abdallah Gamal 09 November 2011

Wo0o0o0w, gr8 work, that's really what I call the magic of poetry, so beautiful and awesome and remember me of a famous poet here her Nickname is Crimson Love, she is also talented like you, a gr8 piece of work, keep it up, we wait more from you :)

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