Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Crimes Of Winter Comments

Rating: 2.8

coulors of autumn, red and brown.
summer gets ready to hand over her crown.
winter is coming to take his reign.
darkened clouds and torrent rain.
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jason mcgookin
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A wonderful poem explaining the different climates and its nice nature.

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Kerry O'Connor 27 June 2009

i like the balance of light and shade; images of death and life.

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Sharon-Ann Dawson 12 June 2009

Excellent. I love how you have personalised the seasons. fantastically written. Although, I have to say, in my opinion, there is a lot of beauty in winter.

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So happy to see hope here! ! ! So lovely! ! ! !

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