My roommates and I congregated in our suite's great room and we'll head out for dinner soon.
'Have you ever eaten dog food? ' Leong asked Anna.
'No, ' Anna answered, 'it smells like chicken - it's got chicken in it'
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Not too many people have the self-awareness and understanding and compassion you displayed within this poem... and so please do not lose them ever since they are essential to writing and life and healthy change.... a very nice and well written poem....5 stars
I liked your poem, too. Direct, realistic, well thought out. It's dialogue form makes it all the more vivid and alive, all around..