Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Crimes Against Myself Comments

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Disappearing words
on pure white linen paper
once edged with the deepest
indigo ink, words of purest love.
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Captain Cur
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Bri Edwards 28 September 2018

(cont.) [from Wikipedia]: Although forcing captives to walk the plank is a motif of pirates in popular culture in the 19th through 21st centuries, few instances are documented, so the frequency of the practice is uncertain.] nice one, Cap'n. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 September 2018

to busy to say them when I could, see the typo? right? let me get this 'straight'. this is a poem you translated from Captain Cur's coded journal? ? ? i guess we'd better make Cap'n walk the plank! to MyPoemList. (cont.)

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Khairul Ahsan 16 April 2014

'no longer afraid of loving you' - This line resonates! Loved your poem.

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