Monday, November 4, 2013

Crime And Clime Comments

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Missed the ‘l’ typed the ‘r’
Clime became crime
Don’t think I strayed too far
It was in tune with the time
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 05 November 2013

Very good poem. Your warning was accurate and well presented - will anyone heed it?

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Valsa George 05 November 2013

Fantastic! ! The synergy between clime and crime is beautifully brought out, Pradip!

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Valsa George 05 November 2013

Fantastic! ! The synergy between clime and crime is beautifully brought out, Pradip!

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Gajanan Mishra 04 November 2013

singing rhymes in tears, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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