Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Cries Of My Happiness. Comments

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Why don't you ever talk to me?
Why don't you ever laugh with me?
I dwell somewhere deep inside you.
And live breath all the breathes with you.
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Zainab Lone
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2018

I dwell somewhere deep inside you. When you forget me in the desires of yours, When the light of your will let you down, ...happiness personified, happiness living in you and calling you. happiness that comes on your eyes and lips and face..... even when u adopt a life that will kill your happiness. very fine poem. i studied every line of your poem......... you have great future as a poet. write and write and be spiritual in your core. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Zainab 14 June 2018

Thanks. I'll try to write better and better

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Naila Rais 13 June 2018

A true piece.... Deep from the heart.... Never take someone's comment seriously.... There are many to discourage you... Keep up the good work..10.. Thanks for sharing... You may like to read my poems and express your views too.. Naila

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Zainab 14 June 2018

Thanks dear. I'll surely check your stuff.

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Robert Murray Smith 12 June 2018

A good effort. This type of poem is a dime a dozen. Try and broaden your scope. There is a big world out there. So many interesting things to write about.

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Zainab 14 June 2018

I'll keep your suggestion in consideration next time.

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