Cries Of My Happiness. Comments

I dwell somewhere deep inside you. When you forget me in the desires of yours, When the light of your will let you down, ...happiness personified, happiness living in you and calling you. happiness that comes on your eyes and lips and face..... even when u adopt a life that will kill your happiness. very fine poem. i studied every line of your poem......... you have great future as a poet. write and write and be spiritual in your core. thank u dear poetess. tony

A true piece.... Deep from the heart.... Never take someone's comment seriously.... There are many to discourage you... Keep up the good work..10.. Thanks for sharing... You may like to read my poems and express your views too.. Naila

A good effort. This type of poem is a dime a dozen. Try and broaden your scope. There is a big world out there. So many interesting things to write about.