Cries Of An Orphan Comments

I am wretched and breathless, Panting with exhaustion of such thing called life My looks are all agony but, Nobody notices the terror in my feelings Tears and sweat flow like streams down my face. What a touching poem my poetriend. thank u

Deeply poignant, moving and touching poem. It expresses in detail the pains and sufferings of an orphan. Vividly depicted and well conveyed. My heart goes with you. May you find solace and everlasting happiness.

Good poem,you seem to have a passion keep up the good works

Tears and sweat flow like streams down my face, . Surprisingly, they all believe that I am as happy So emotionally expressed...10

I like it it's deep I hear your cries

Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of the language. Sad tale of harsh reality that is the life of most orphans told in eloquent finesse. A poignant piece of poetry set aside for sober reflection. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing bro.

sad poem, showing the true feelings of the writer

This has to be one of the best poems i have read xxx

A sad and true poem my friend.beautiful and heartfelt poem.honest and pure .keep it up Alison xxx

My looks are all agony but, Nobody notices the terror in my feelings Tears and sweat flow like streams down my face. Surprisingly, they all believe I am as happy. one can cry inside and go with a smiling face........understanding your heart.. i write this to you my dear poet...... we shall turn to help all others who are suffering...... tony

The journey to life,everyone enters his own story