Thursday, February 2, 2017

Cries Of A Model Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am thankful to you,
my dear artist,
for making me a model of your new painting,
you spent a lot of money,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Denis Mair 20 May 2017

It seems he is more attached to the image he envisions than to the flesh and blood woman beside him. Idealizing her doesn't do any good in real life.

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Rose Kanana 05 February 2017

I like the flow of the entire poem, emotions brought out...good words justice done here

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 February 2017

A nice and thoughtful poem...............................................

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Rajnish Manga 03 February 2017

Fine portrayal of feelings from the model's (more so when it a cat) point of view. It may equally be applicable to men and women who serve as a model. Thanks.

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