Monday, November 2, 2015

Crickets - Haiku (5-7-5 Meter) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Clandestine anklets
Circus din dark thickets
Carousing - Crickets
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Seema Jayaraman
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Heenal Vora 04 November 2015

excellent one haiku wowww

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Kelly Kurt 03 November 2015

Thanks for the invite to read. You are right, I do enjoy haiku

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

lovely lovely Haiku this is a very nice read-10

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Seema Jayaraman 02 November 2015

Thank you Loke Kok, happy you enjoyed.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 November 2015

Beautifully metered haiku with wonderful meanings. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Jayaraman 02 November 2015

Thank you Ratnakarji. Came out fine an ode to crazy creekers.

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Rajnish Manga 02 November 2015

Impeccable and immensely beautiful, word-wise and sensible. Thanks, Seema ji.

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Seema Jayaraman 02 November 2015

Thank you Rajnishji.

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