Thursday, May 8, 2014

Cricket In The City Comments

Rating: 4.8

All those Nike feet
Pound the black tar street
Busily bundled in bustling herds
Where too many words
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Susan Lacovara
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Sayeed Abubakar 10 May 2014

You have a true poetic genius. I like this poem very much, specially your rhymes.

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Darlene Walsh 09 May 2014

I love to visit NYC, but would never want to live there. Seas of people rushing everywhere, but they all seem to be alone. She stood quietly, a rock in the stream of human traffic flooding down the street. NYC really needs a cricket.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

This piece is wonderful

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