Cricket Comments

@kee thampi- was that a compliment or a complain

this poet express words like a cartoon How was that? appealed the bowler the umpire thinks for some seconds while the bowler looks at him anxiously the umpire finally raises his finger

You are pretty good. I usually if critiquing/ bad speller here and no spell check/ anyway mention the overuse of adjectives or unecessary words. You seem to have gotten the words that are redundant or just not needed out. What I am trying to say is your poems are well written. Thank you for bringing your poetry to my attention.