Bubble forth and crawl inland
Clamber to die on washed sand
Wave after wave of crested peak
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Crest and troughs are apt metaphors of life and it true that 'Crests and troughs play out an eon' through the limitless time. It remembers me Longfellow's 'The tide rises, the tide falls'.
Wow a seaside marvel to read! Dis is more dashing than what i usually read. U have taken God's creativity n put it to pen n ink flow like d sea.
Marvelous couplets, the message even bigger! ! and the style? s.a.t style! _soul
Beautiful. And you ended your poem marvelously, with a true Maxim In nature are strewn messages of life solutions to mans quest, endless strife
Oh it is a most peaceful, calming place. I love to be close to the ocean, with its soothing rhythm! You took me there! Mmmmmmm
original and natural.. a lot can be read and be learned through nature.. life, emotions, art, beauty, the things seen and unseen... thanks for sharing!
In nature are strewn messages of life solutions to mans quest, endless strife a passing strong scribe! ! !
lifes lessons can really be learnt through the beauty and simplicity of nature as well as its ability to nurture and destruct.... well said.. man is the only aberration in the nature's scheme of things, whose greed and hunger knows no bounds.
Beautiful poem and I particularly like your last verse summing up the poem well. Thank you for sharing.