Thursday, May 3, 2012

Crescent Moon Over Over The Eiffel Tower Comments

Rating: 3.2

First I think of Jesus, or not actually Jesus,
but the vapour trail from a jet, which makes
a line across the hard sky parallel with the top
of my window, which makes me think of Apollinaire
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Douglas Scotney 09 June 2015

Clever way to get Jesus into a poem that's not about him. You'd be able to find a closer spot where the trail and the moon sit on the top.

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