Crescent Moon Comments

This is very powerful. Absolute peace seems much stronger than any tantrum could ever be..(smile)

Genuine way of accepting the outbound one...wellsaid

This reads so smoothly and slowly with a hush that makes it so easy to accept the painful consequence of what transpires.

She slipped away as softly as a sigh. This is such a tender poem Laurie. The things one may remember about a moment such as this, like the hush of birdsong and glow of a crecent moon.She lays the keys on the shelf. she touches his cheek. YOu have such a gift but it is merely your lovely soul making its way through words to touch the world. As always you have my high regard for your work. Susan

A crescent moon and a harp...your poem makes beautiful music more than worthy of a ten. Kind regards, Sandra

I enjoyed the theme you have given this, how gently bitter/sweetly have potrayed the image of the sadness within your heart, this is penned very tenderly, enjoyed this much....

I'm a moon child myself, This poem has such a calming rhyme to it. You can feel the content within it. A really good write 10+++

This is a nice write another 10 I think

hey this again is a lovely write indeed SIR! ! ! .. very reminiscent of Karin ma'am s beautiful pieces... i liked this one too.. great refreshment indeed.... good one to relax the sore mind.. 10++ with lots of love shan

This is such a stunning poem Laurie. I love the way if flows, weaving in and out if beautiful images throughout. 10 Karin Anderson

Aww Laurie, ive said it before and i will say it again, you always do know how to reach a heart and hold its attention in your writing hand. Very well done my friend, another gem here. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

enchanting like the crescent moon...did she leave the ring so that he can love again?