Sunday, August 23, 2020

Crescent Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fisherman's boat
Sailing on the black ocean
With a mighty hand.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

boat of fishermen = Crescent Moon = starting new month = new adventurous life! great thought

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 September 2020

beautiful Haiku about God

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

A beautiful imagery drawn in just three lines! Very well done, dear poetess. When the moon is nascent, that is when it is only a crescent and not yet a full moon, the seas get dark immediately after twilight. The fishermen row their boats with their mighty hands to transport men and materials and also to catch fish. This is a usual sight along the sea sides and river sides, which has been nicely depicted in the poem. The poem gets 10/10 from me.

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Anjandev Roy 29 August 2020

....black ocean......brilliantly written....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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A gleaming metaphor. It's pleasant to travel in the boat across the black sea if there is a mighty hand to row...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Fishermen! ! Sailors at night! With the romance of the moon. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2020

Sailing! ! ! ! At night! Musing along with nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 August 2020

Beautiful nature described here, because it is not yet full moon, the ocean is also very dark, almost black, but the mighty hand is the deciding factor that the fishing will be great! Very beautiful Haiku and thought-provoking, thank you so much sharing this loveliest haiku, great poetess! A 10 Full Score for the loveliest haiku and toMyPoemsList!

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2020

Sweet one. A gem to read again and again. Loved it.

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Shaun Cronick 24 August 2020

Short and sweet and much more than nice and neat. Three great lines to stir one's imagination to make one truly think on what can be achieved and overcome. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing your poetry gem. A full score so thoroughly and richly deserved. Take care and remain blessed.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well penned piece. Simply pretty and wonderful....10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

it is short but deep, here we are confronting very provoking ideas; such as: the big job and duty needs a proper person to do it, including preparation for it, our dear professional poet always has got some thing new and amazing to share with us, many thanks..it deserves 10+and into fav list ***

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

black ocean - > mighty hand.- > success

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Kim Barney 23 August 2020

Nice haiku done by you!

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Dominic Windram 23 August 2020

Excellent haiku Rose Marie.I can imagine this scenario under a Crescent Moon. It's a ten from me!

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Kostas Lagos 23 August 2020

A wonderful image! Congrats!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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