Sunday, April 6, 2014

Crescent Moon Comments

Rating: 4.3

After twilight the moon is reborn
her sickle shaped face is captivating
like a lass under teen inviting her youth
stars surrounded her in throng
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ramesh rai
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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

Chand ki kalaon ka yeh sunder aur romanchak karan, kavi ki achuti kalpana, is kavita ka sondarya kewal poorab wale hi iska anand le sakte hayn, jahan lajja sondarya ko barhati hay aur prmi ko uksati hay.

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

this makes you picture the entire landscape full of stars.............with crescent moon lighting up the night skies! ...............lovely write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 April 2014

she covers her face under azure sky. Crescent moon is beautifully described in the poem. Thank you.

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