Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Crescent Fairy Comments

Rating: 4.9

POEM
I saw a shoe a' sailing
a' sailing on the sea
The fairies were it a' using
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
COMMENTS
Darlene Walsh 18 April 2015

A lovely entertaining poem with very nice rhyming, I love fantasy and fairy stories.

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Amitava Sur 06 April 2015

A sweet fairy tale, very pleasing and calming.A lovely story telling, enjoyed the detailing about your surname... 'moon ka puri'... very nice.

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Noreen Carden 30 March 2015

lovely magical fairy poem well done I enjoyed reading this

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Matt Mooney 24 March 2015

Enjoyed reading this lovely, magical poem.

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Elaine Sept 17 March 2015

I love the happy and fun tone set for this poem. We do not let our imaginations play much, and this is just such a playground to have a wonderful time. I enjoyed this very much.

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Rajnish Manga 09 March 2015

You must have the kind of delicate imagination to become a fairy queen and to sail all the seven seas and to travel into medieval times. I have seen a fairy on the placid face of the moon but I didn't know it was you, the Moon ka Puri. Fantastic poem. I quote a few lines: So lets then sup on magic beans / and time travel to medieval kings and queens.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 March 2015

This was really an enjoyable journey into fantasy and imagination...Lovely!

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 March 2015

This was really an enjoyable journey into fantasy and imagination...Lovely!

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Renee Maritz 01 March 2015

I love this Fairy poem. Nice to see that some people still have their inner happy child :)

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Brian Stafford 27 February 2015

very nice inventive tale!

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Darlene Walsh 27 February 2015

I love fairy poems and this one is lovely, I enjoyed it very much. Darla :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 February 2015

Nicely envisioned with deep imagination. Very good word choise. Beautiful poem, I enjoyed it. Many thanks fairy in the moon.

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Valsa George 25 February 2015

I enjoyed the coinage of your name to mean Moon fairy! Shoes being used as sailing boats by fairies and you getting into one of them along with the fairies and travelling over the seven seas! What a merry trip! Lovely imagination!

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Lyn Paul 24 February 2015

Dear Moon Fairy.. such a sweet flow of words. Thank You

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