Thursday, May 8, 2008

Cremating Coffee Comments

Rating: 4.5

For living I drink coffee
For dying I let this oil slick
of caffeine spill all over me
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Rehan Hyder
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Christine Austin Cole 23 May 2008

Ah, I love it when something common is deciding not so on the page. I'm an absolute caffeine addict and though it may be ridiculous, generally always click on poems with 'coffee' in the title. From title forward, this piece was a wonderful and especially creative surprise with its many uncommon associations and the unexpected and intriguing 'you' at the end. Love this! Christine

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Indira Babbellapati 09 May 2008

rehan reminds me of some of the poems i wrote on iraq war...

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