Creeping Comes The Day Comments
The feathering fog
Creeps down the boulevard
As if a shaken sheet
Across a bed
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A lovely title! ......An artistic and lovely description of a foggy day...... I loved the imagery and the visual elements! ..Kudos...! .
Loved the imagery. Such a poetic and artistic description of a fogy day! Beautiful!
A great poem Susan. I love the line - 'holding back the day's dance'
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8/4/2025 3:46:39 AM # 1.0.0
Love this poem Susan! Your wording depicts perfectly how the fog does seem to creep and slither around and over! Nicely done!